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-You have come— You have come into my life.
+You have arrived, in my life arrived...
-Illuminating the world, You have come into my life.
+Making the world bright, You have come into my life.
-The sound of your ankle bells penetrated my heart's core.
+The sound of Your ankle bells, penetrating heart's core,
-Oh, it obliterated all my sorrow.
+That made me forget all of my troubles.
-Be with me, stay with me.
+You are with me, stay with me;
-Thrilling me with sweet tremors of bliss, stay with me.
+In blissful tremors,{{#tag:ref|According to the [http://dsalsrv02.uchicago.edu/cgi-bin/app/biswas-bengali_query.py?qs=%E0%A6%AE%E0%A7%82%E0%A6%B0%E0%A7%8D%E0%A6%9B%E0%A6%A8%E0%A6%BE&searchhws=yes Samsad Bengali-English Dictionary], ''múrchaná'' (মূর্ছনা) is the kind of gentle tremor of voice that occurs frequently in this song.|group="nb"}} please abide with me.
-Your sweet smile has made my heart overflowing
+Your sweet smile, the heart overwhelming,
-And divested me of everything else.
+It did snatch my everything.
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