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-Enter my mind; sit in my mind—
+Please come into my mind, in my mind be seated;
-Oh Lord, say something in my mind.
+Speak, oh Lord, within my very thought.
-Oh my most intimate Lord,
+Oh my deity most intimate,
-Enter my cogitation, enter my meditation.
+Arrive in cognition and in meditation.
-Infatuation with sweet and flawless beauty,
+Sweetness Pristine, in honeyed entrance
-Ensnarement in the realm of alluring dreams,
+To the region tangled with dreamy euphoria,
-Intoxication with floral fragrance—
+Heart gladdening with floral fragrance,
-Come, put an end to my yearning.
+Please come, eliminating anxiousness.
-With more and more songs in more rhythms and melodies,
+With greater rhythm and melody, more and more song,
-Enter, Lord, into every corner of my mind.
+Come, Lord, into every corner of the heart.
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