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 Tomár surer pratiikśáy
 Tomára álote tomára surete
-Nava spandan áno dharáy{{#tag:ref|In the audio file, these last two lines are treated as a separate verse. However, in the latest Bengali edition,<ref name="PRS Vol1" /> these two lines are appended to the second verse. Here the latest Bangla is preferred.|group="nb"}}
+Nava spandan áno dharáy{{#tag:ref|In the audio file, these last two lines are treated as a separate verse. However, in the latest Bengali edition,<ref name="PRS Vol1" /> these two lines are appended to the second verse. In this instance, the latest Bangla is preferred.|group="nb"}}
 Je bá bhálabáse táke bhálabáso
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-Come into my life, come into my mind;
+My life and mind, please enter;
-Come with the expression of dance.
+Come with dance-gestures.
-Thou, sea of grace, the pitcher of my heart—
+Oh Sea of Beauty, heart's pitcher
-Fill it to the brim.
+Fill up to the brim.
-Every half-opened flower bud
+All flower-buds are half-opened
-Relies on Your light.
+In hope of Your luster.
-In the blue yonder, all are mum,
+At far blue yon, all are struck dumb
-Waiting for Your tune.
+With Your tune's expectation.
-With Your light, with Your tune,
+Through Your light, through Your music,
-You bring to earth a pulse that is new.
+New pulsation You bring unto Earth.
-You love those who love You;
+Those who love, You love them;
-You even feel for those who love You not.
+Those who don't, them too You feel for.
-At every opportunity, in exchange for mind,
+In exchange for a mind, at each chance,
-You fill one with the elixir of life.
+You saturate with life's nectar.
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