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 Apart from You there is nothing at all.
 Today, I want not what once I desired;
-In Thee everything has dissolved.
+In You everything has united.
-The secrets of my heart, in a garden hard to reach—
+In heart's privacy, in a garden hard to reach,
-All that I'd kept concealed—
+All that I had kept concealed,
-Out of love for Thee, in Your new melody,
+Out of love for You, in Your new melody,
 I have lavished that upon the world.
 Today, in exchange for all, I’ve got You;
-In You I've realized the true goal of my pursuit.
+I've realized You only as the essence.
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