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 On the dried up riverbed, a flood came down.
-The garland of defeated hearts returned;
+The garland held by defeated hearts has returned;
-Our wicker tray{{#tag:ref|According to the [http://dsalsrv02.uchicago.edu/cgi-bin/romadict.pl?query=%E0%A6%A1%E0%A6%BE%E0%A6%B2%E0%A6%BE&searchhws=yes&table=biswas-bengali Samsad Bengali-English Dictionary], ''d́álá'' (ডালা) is a tray-shaped basket that typically is used for holding offerings to a deity.|group="nb"}} was filled with lost flowers.
+Our wicker basket{{#tag:ref|According to the [http://dsalsrv02.uchicago.edu/cgi-bin/romadict.pl?query=%E0%A6%A1%E0%A6%BE%E0%A6%B2%E0%A6%BE&searchhws=yes&table=biswas-bengali Samsad Bengali-English Dictionary], ''d́álá'' (ডালা) is a tray-shaped basket that typically is used for holding offerings to a deity.|group="nb"}} has filled with lost flowers.
 To the rhythm and tune of songs forgotten,
 Our psychic lotus swayed the heavenly realm.
 Everyone heard the message of novelty;
-Our new world was adorned with canopy.
+A new world was fitted with canopy.
 Abounding in fresh social service,
-At once, Earth's cadence was thrilling.
+All at once, Earth's cadence was thrilling.
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