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 He smiles even in the black pupil of my eyes.
-The more I try to forget Him, the more I remember—
+Whenever I try to forget Him, I do not forget—
-The more I remember.
+I do not forget.
-To live and leave Him, how difficult it is—.
+To leave Him and go on living, how hard it is—
-How difficult it is.
+How hard it is.
 Wherever I look, I see only His form.
-He is inside me, resplendent and laughing.
+He is inside me, smiling brightly.
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