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 Dust-grayed, I'd been in a wayside cranny,
 Taking pains [[:wikipedia:Sadhu|sandalpaste]] applying.
-Seems like Someone whispered in my ears:
+Seems like Someone told in both my ears:
-"Distant became all your pain."
+"Remote became all your pain."
 Mesmerized, I continued;