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-Fortunate You have made my life,
+Fortunate You've made my life,
-Awarding Your unbounded love.
+Conferring Your boundless love.
-Rhythm You've imbued for my delight,
+Cadence You've packed for my delight,
-Under pretext of Your peerless sport.
+Through pretext of Your matchless sport.
-Darling, You have come with kinship's honey
+Lover, You'd brought kinship's honey
-To fill me with the light of love only.
+To load me with a friendly light only.
-Expanding and uplifting psyche,
+The devout and effusive heart
-You've infused endless energy.
+You had filled with endless vigor.
-You ask for naught, and You take nothing;
+For naught do You ask, and You take nothing;
-Knowing my flaws so many, You don't scorn me...
+Knowing my so many flaws, You don't scorn me...
-You said to go ahead, righteous path adhering.
+Erect along the path, You've told to proceed.
-On a stream of light You did manifest;
+By a stream of light You had shed,
-The lamp eternal You had kindled.
+The lamp eternal You'd ignited.
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