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 There had been first rise of dawn;
-Eastern sky became colored.
+The eastern sky became colored.
-On the plants and ivy verdancy did come;
+Upon plants and ivy verdancy did come;
 In many dyes all were attired.
-That creation, it had been on which day hoary;
+That creation had occurred on some day hoary;
 Your new vision a new Earth received.
 Lovingly, You conferred the rains of mercy;