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-O Lord, You are the apostle of new light.
+My Lord, You are the pristine light.
-From what far-distant realm have You come?
+From what great distance have You come?
+Now the rhythms of the universe
+Dance round and round you.
-All the rhythms of the universe are now dancing around You.
+I remember my gloomy nights,
-You are the apostle of new light.
+Clouded with deep solitude.
-You were hidden in the loneliness of that deep and dark night.
+Spreading ever-new wings
-But now, You have pierced the veil of darkness.
+You came flying, piercing the darkness.
-Soaring on wings ever new,
+All dejection has lifted.
-You are the apostle of new light.
+Today, every hope has blossomed.
-All despair has vanished, and hope has blossomed.
+Love is all-pervasive,
-The universe has been flooded with an all-embracing wave of love.
+Flooding the entire universe.
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