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-In Your name, in Your song
+In Your name, in Your song,
-I have lost myself.
+My inner self was lost.
-The traveler who was lost in the darkness
+The traveler wandering in the dark
-has now discovered the stream of light.
+Has found the fountain of effulgence.
-The intoxicating air tries to bind me
+The heady atmosphere with illusory ties—
-with its bondages of attachment
+If she comes to bind me—
-I will say, smiling sweetly,
+With a sweet smile I will say to her,
-"I have smashed the stony prison walls."
+"I have smashed your prison walls."
 All Your creatures are worthy of adoration.