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 Has found the fountain of effulgence.
-The heady atmosphere with illusory ties—
+The bewitching atmosphere with illusory ties—
 If she comes to bind me—
 With a sweet smile I will say to her,
 "I have smashed your prison walls."
-All Your creatures are worthy of adoration.
+All living beings are respectable;
-Lord, accept my pranam (salutation).
+Accept my humble salutation.
-All minds are unique.
+All minds are incomparable;
-Lord, receive my namaska'r (salutation).
+Accept my homage.
-I have come in the flow of universal momentum,
+I have come in the flow of attractive movement,
-like the nectar in a flower blossom.
+Like nectar in a flower blossom.
-Today, the call of Your enchanting name
+Today, the enchantment of Your name calls me
-has shattered all my bondages.
+To forsake all former bonds.
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