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 Dancing in countless rhythms.
-By Your unbounded grace,
+Through Your blessing the world has received life.
-The world has been given life.
+Through Your incantation the world has received mind.
-With Your divine ideation,
+Through Your limitless charity, Your compassion,
-The creatures have evolved their minds.
-By Your unfathomable kindness,
-In Your cosmic rhythm,
 The world has learned to sing and dance.
-There is no song without You,
-No dance without You
+Without You there is no song; without You there is no dance.
-Countless mantras (incantations) have evolved,
+Countless mantras exist to remember You.
-Just to remember You.
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