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-O Lord,
+I have had You with me...
-I have attained You in the smiling crimson dawn,
+In the cheery crimson light of dawn,
-In the murmurings of the lotus garden,
+In the warbling in the lotus garden,
-In the morning breeze,
+In the morning breeze, in the waterfall,
-In the flow of the fountains,
+In the lonely forest paths.
-In the lonely tree-lined forest paths.
-I have attained You in the ups and downs of my path,
+In the ups and downs on the path of progress,
-In laughter and in dance,
+In laughter and dance, in rhythm and melody,
-In rhythm and in melody,
+In sweet memories, in heartfelt songs,
-In sweet remembrances,
+In everything heard and thought...
-In the song of my innermost heart,
+I have got to know You.
-In all that I hear and all that I think,
-In the murmurings of the lotus garden.
-I have realized You,
 I have loved You, I have brought You close
-In my memories and in all my eloquent dreams.
+In my resonant dreams and reflections.
 </poem>
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