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 | <poem>
 Winter has come, accompanied by
-Portraits of colorful flowers—
+Drawings of colorful flowers,
-Flowers without fragrance or nectar—
+Flowers without fragrance or nectar,
 And the pale light of the sun.
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 That is what I think today.
-Listen one and all, oh listen,
+Listen all my brothers, listen—
-The distant sun will again come near.
+The distant sun will again come close.
-Do not be concerned.
+Do not worry at all.
-In the cold of the earth,
+In earth's winter, with songs of hope,
-In the pale light of the sun,
+We paint pictures of the new.
-With the song of hope,
-We paint pictures of a new time to come.
 </poem>
 |}