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-I never thought You would come on this winter night,
+I never thought You'd come on a winter night,
-On this rainy winter night.
+On a rainy winter night.
 You came very close,
-Though I did not ask You to come close or closer.
+Though I never asked You to come so close.
+Outside the wind was biting;
+So all my doors were bolted.
+Cracking the bolt, I did not ask You in—
+To come inside my house.
-Outside the biting wind blew,
-And all the doors were closed.
-I did not open the door and tell You,
-"Come inside, come inside the house,
-On this rainy, wintry night."
 Your eyes stared at my face.
 Who knows why You gazed at me.