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 I threaded my garlands.
-My garland is not simply woven
+My garlands are not just strung
-With fallen blossoms that I picked up.
+With fallen jasmines I picked up.
-A song of compassion and a love for the dawn
+A song of love and a love for dawn
-Attaches to each petal.
+Are woven into each petal.
-The whole morning, neglecting all my work,
+The whole morning, neglecting all work,
-I have threaded flowers.
+I threaded my garlands.
-With a gentle laugh and a heart full of love,
+With but a meek smile and love,
-I have come to adorn You.
+For You I have brought them.
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