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 On an autumn dawn drenched in dew,
-I threaded a garland of night jasmines.{{#tag:ref|The [[wikipedia:Nyctanthes arbor-tristis|night-flowering jasmine]], known as ''shefali'' or ''shiuli'' in Bengali, is a tree or shrub whose fragrant flowers open at dusk and close at dawn. The flower is the official state flower of West Bengal.|group="nb"}}
+I threaded garlands of night jasmine.{{#tag:ref|The [[wikipedia:Nyctanthes arbor-tristis|night-flowering jasmine]], known as ''shefali'' or ''shiuli'' in Bengali, is a tree or shrub whose fragrant flowers open at dusk and close at dawn. The flower is the official state flower of West Bengal.|group="nb"}}
 I would adorn Your feet, Lord;
 With this desire I have come.
-The white clouds were floating in the sky above,
+Floating in the sky above, some white clouds,
-As if covered with honey.
+Coated with honey, were moving.
-The smiling lilies
+Swaying in fragrant delight
-Swayed with fragrant bliss.
+Were the laughing lilies.
-Sitting in that atmosphere, intoxicated with joy,
+Seated in that atmosphere, in ecstasy,
-I threaded a garland for You.
+I threaded my garlands.
 My garland is not simply woven