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 The cosmos conveys the sound of Your ankle bells;
 With Your jingling appeal, the blood thrills.
-Be seated, please be seated, in my meditation.
+Be seated, please be seated, in my ''dhyán''.{{#tag:ref|''Dhyán'' is commonly translated as "meditation". More accurately, it is a process whereby the mind flows in a continuous stream toward the Supreme.|group="nb"}}
-Bathed in your joy all sing your praise.
+At Your sweet pleasure, everyone sings harmoniously;
-Mind's peacock breaks into a prance
+The peacock of mind dances in a hundred streams.{{#tag:ref|This might be a reference to the 100-petaled lotus at the ''guru cakra''. In some forms of tantric meditation, the guru (personal representation of the Supreme) is seated within that lotus.|group="nb"}}
-Into a hundredfaceted dazzling dance.
+Look, please look, at me.
-Look o my lord
-Look lovingly at my face.
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