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-For You, some sleep not, night or day;
+For You, night and day, some don't sleep;
-Expecting You, they take heart.
+And others, in hope of You, take heart.
-Some sing songs to forget their pain,
+To forget their pain, some sing songs;
-And some shed tears in ceaseless downpour.{{#tag:ref|Literally, this translates as: "Some weep like the showers in the month of [[:wikipedia:Shraavana|Shrávana]]." In India, Shrávana comes at the height of the monsoon season in India and is known for its incessant rain.|group="nb"}}
+And others shed a ceaseless stream of tears.{{#tag:ref|Literally, this translates as: "Some weep like the showers in the month of [[:wikipedia:Shraavana|Shrávana]]." In India, Shrávana comes at the height of the monsoon season in India and is known for its incessant rain.|group="nb"}}
 None can forget