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 Before our eyes, it wends its way eternally.
-Only moving onward, ever onward,
+Flowing onward, ever onward only,
-A babbling tune is its talk.
+A babbling tune is its story.
-Halting its advance for no obstruction,
+Halting its advance for no impediment,
 For day or night it makes no concession.
-Its movement is dance,
+Its movement is to the rhythm of dance;
-its language incessant song.
+Its speech is in the form of song.
-Mingling into the surging waves
+Through a magnanimous series of waves,
-of universal life,
+It converges with its source, the ocean.
-it becomes a vast ocean.
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