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 Are mad for Your love tryst.
 In the rhythm of that amorous play,
-All feelings and every longing,
+All feeling and every longing,
 Dissipate within Thee.
-You saturate with sweet consciousness
+By awareness of You, colorful moments
-my colourful moments
+Get filled with sweetness.
-and my lonely life
+A lonesome soul goes wild with delight,
-in anticipation of your blissful touch
+Owing to Your touch.
-Your melodious rhythms
+In that melodic cadence,
-breaks into exuberant joy.
+Every attainment and all amity
-My attainments merge in your cadence.
+Dance as one to the same beat.
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