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 Soul's violin now plays a single melody,
 Day and night, in my lovesick heart:
-Come, please come, Lord, come to me.
+Come, please come, oh, come to me.
-From this tune's impact in my heart of hearts,
+From this tune's impact on my heart of hearts,
-You're not distant; You're no longer very far.
+You are never far away, no longer very far.
-Where I do selfless service, I peer therein;
+In my selfless service, there I peer within;
-And within my every deed, You lie hidden.
+And inside every deed You lie hidden.
 Whichever way i look