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 Whatever You gave with the right hand,
-With the left hand You have taken back.
+With the left hand You've taken back.
-When all asking and getting are finished,
+When all asking and getting have finished,
-I've noticed that the final tally, it is nil.
+I've noticed the final tally, it is nil.
-You made no demand but You know I'm now with You,
+"You made no demand, but know I'm now with"...
-These very words are played upon Your flute.
+Upon Your flute is played this message.
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