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-My abiding friend, sing Your sweet songs—
+Abiding Friend, Your ambrosial song please sing,
-Shatter my drowsiness.
+Kindly shatter my deep sleep!
-My abiding friend, regard me always,
+Abiding Friend, gaze at me incessantly,
-O my beloved, my most beloved.
+Oh my beloved, my own dearest dear.
-Today my life's lethargy has been severed;
+Today, severed is life's lethargy;
-My mind is filled with exquisite beauty.
+In its place is mind's exquisite beauty.
-Today, with Your rhythm, with Your streaming ambrosia,
+Now, by Your whim, with cascade of honey,
-Take me to the new.
+Kindly take and remake me.
-Let me flow in heavenly current;
+Now, in seamless light, in heaven's stream,
-Fill me with transcendental thought.
+Fill me with transcendent feeling.
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