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-My Lord, what shall I say to You—
+Abiding Friend, what shall I say to Thee?
-You who have shattered my dark slumber?
+You broke my dark and gloomy sleep;
-The path of light alone I will tread—
+Now, only on light's path will I proceed...
-I will tread, I will tread, I will tread.
+I will proceed, I will proceed.
-My budding flower lay neglected.
+The budding flower lying slighted,
-You have threaded it in Your garland.
+You have threaded on Your garland.
-The sullied offerings of my mind
+An offering of soiled psyche
-You have taken on Your lap.
+You've accepted on Your lap.
-In exchange for all, I received You.
+In return for all, You I've received.
-Only Your words I will heed—
+Now, Your words only will I heed;
-I will heed, I will heed, I will heed.
+I will pay heed, I will pay heed.
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