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-Winter has come, accompanied by
+Winter has come and brought with it
-Drawings of colorful flowers,
+A colored flower's portrait...
-Flowers without fragrance or nectar,
+A flower without scent and without wine,
-Under the pale light of the sun.
+A sun with scant sunshine.
-When the sun was near, I would think
+When sun was near, I used to think,
-This unbearable heat can no way be endured—
+I cannot bear such extreme heat...
-The dreadful Lord would be gracious
+Oh Wrathful Lord, please show mercy,
-To bring showers.
+Granting my desire for rain.
-But when sun was near, it was better—
+When sun was near, then clime was fair...
-That is what I think today.
+This is what I think today.
-Listen all my brothers, listen—
+Listen all my cousins, hear me please,
-The distant sun will again come close;
+The sun that's distant will come near...
-Do not worry at all.
+Have no worry, do not fear.
-In earth's winter, with songs of hope,
+In Earth's winter with hope's paean,
-We paint portraits of the ever-new.
+We sketch a picture of change.
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