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 Dampening them with my tears.
-On the eastern horizon, light streams;
+On eastern sky, the light streams;
-With a gentle smile, it beams.
+With gentle smile, it does beam.
-That radiance, it is Yours, Lord;
+That smile, Lord, it is Yours;
-It is full of beauty and gaiety.
+With form and color it is filled.
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