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 Lord, I've assigned my life to Thee;
-Will You not gaze once more at me?
+Won't You gaze once more at me?
 All my aspiration, all my adoration—
-Around You do they now rotate.
+Around You they now rotate.
-The sound of Your footsteps to hear,
+The sound of Your feet to hear,
-Night and day I remain ever awake.{{#tag:ref|There seems to be some difference of opinion about the first two words of this line. In the published book and in the audio file referenced in this article, the first two words are ''juge juge'' (যুগে যুগে), meaning "age after age". However, on some official cassettes, instead of ''juge juge'', ''divánishi'' (দিবানিশি) is sung. ''Divánishi'' means "day and night" or "continuously".|group="nb"}}
+Night and day I ever I stay awake.{{#tag:ref|There seems to be some difference of opinion about the first two words of this line. In the published book and in the audio file referenced in this article, the first two words are ''juge juge'' (যুগে যুগে), meaning "age after age". However, on some official cassettes, instead of ''juge juge'', ''divánishi'' (দিবানিশি) is sung. ''Divánishi'' means "day and night" or "continuously".|group="nb"}}
 Fresh, fresh garlands I string,
 Dampening them with my tears.