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 And I flushed with consciousness.
-Within my mind, time after time You appeared;
+Within my mind, time and again You appeared;
 But gazing on all sides, though seen, I do not see.
 My garland of love, painstakingly strung,
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 All be lost on a barren course.
-You have danced in my heart
+Within my heart, time and again You danced;
-enticingly
+But I do not hear that sound, that unstruck melody.{{#tag:ref|At the heart center, the ''anáhata cakra'' (literally, "unstruck plexus"), the sound of ankle bells keeping rhythm with the heartbeat may be heard by an elevated mind. The sound is deemed to be "unstruck", because it occurs without there being two things coming in contact with each other, for example, the strings of a sitar and the fingers of a sitar player.|group="nb"}}
-yet i listened not to her song.
+With my well-practiced tunes,
-My wellrehearsed tunes
+I have lain asleep, been abstracted.
-remain unsung.
+The songs that I have offered You
+Will all be finished, all unsung—
-Now i surrender unto you
+Unsung in the realm beyond speech.
-laying mute offerings
-at the altar of the indescribable.
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