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 Daytimes come and go, sweetness on strings of rhyme;
 In my mind, they leave behind colored dyes.
-As a repayment for love, under the sun gold-dripping,{{#tag:ref|The bulbul (or bulbuli) is one of the first birds to sing in the morning, often starting just before dawn and continuing for hours. It also likes to sing in the evening.|group="nb"}},
+As love's repayment, under the sun gold-dripping,{{#tag:ref|The bulbul (or bulbuli) is one of the first birds to sing in the morning, often starting just before dawn and continuing for hours. It also likes to sing in the evening.|group="nb"}},
-Golden songs do I sing.
+Golden songs I sing.
 I know your words, fashioned well;